Argument:
the scene cut,
an obstacle removed.
(it shows you glimpsing
the treasure – hunted down)
Aside: a thought (at first no more)
Montage: the cup you cradled in your hands –
Shattered.
the image you saw –
Spilled.
now glittering like tears on a cobweb
running down the torn thread,
dropping into the blank of
all that might have been.
Voice-over: a child, only implied.
(Exit)
shooting, on the road again,
with slightly changed key of lighting.
© jsmorgane (2005)